tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8304303002618074175.post2479494807298099002..comments2012-04-22T21:12:55.612-07:00Comments on <center>Eventual Author</center>: Writing exercise #2Stephhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13975871639557922792noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8304303002618074175.post-43846648807355882182011-02-03T08:13:57.618-08:002011-02-03T08:13:57.618-08:00Seriously, Steph - I think it is great as-is! I a...Seriously, Steph - I think it is great as-is! I am hugely impressed that you "spontaneously" came up with this!! I just read it for a second time and I still am amazed at how completely I was transported into this scene - especially since it is so SHORT!! You get an A+ from me! I think of all of the things that I have read of yours (and I'm sure there are many more that I haven't) - this is my favorite so far! Okay - enough gushing....mantelmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15287030347441376099noreply@blogger.com